Title: The beautiful, hard work of co-parenting

Presenter: Joel Leon

Evaluation

Delivery

  • To me, you seem very uncomfortable telling your story. You have lots of verbal pauses, uhs and ums, at the start, and you’re dancing, swaying back and forth, and nervous laughs. That distracts me from your message and also makes me feel uncomfortable for you. But as you got further into the presentation, those nervous signs mostly disappeared.
  • I especially liked the pace of your presentation and you use of pauses. They were very effective in maintaining the drama and giving me a place to consider what you were telling me as you moved point-to-point. Nice job pausing and letting your audience applaud when your daughter’s picture appeared or when they laughed. You had good presence on the stage.
  • You have effective gestures. The gestures you make throughout the presentation are natural and undistracting. And I liked how you complemented them at times such as pointing towards your heart as you say “my heart is full of love.”

Content

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